Question

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I agree that knowledge is a great treasure that accompanies its owner everywhere. 
To begin with, intelligent and well-informed man is succesful person. Knowledge has an ifnluance on our life. On twenty first century knowledge have a first position in the world.
It builds our lookout and fixes condition in society. Clever person alwaya find  enter in different situation. Moreover, intelligent man tries improve himself. That person is usually rich and famous.

Answer 1

influence (подругому пишется )  и in the 21 century , и knowledge is on the first position in the world , и clever person always will find  an exit in different situations и последнее не  that person , а наверное such person

Answer 2

I agree that knowledge is a great treasure that accompanies its owner everywhere. 
To begin with, an intelligent and well-informed man is a succesful person. Knowledge has an influence on our life. In the twenty first century knowledge is considered to be the most important characteristic of a person (считается самой важной чертой человека).
It builds our lookout and fixes condition in society (не поняла предложение). A clever person always finds solutions to different problems (находит решения проблем). Moreover, an intelligent man is willing to improve himself. Such person is usually rich and famous.