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One morning , me and my sister went to the forest to gather mushrooms. After we collected a basket of mushrooms we went home . On the way saw a rabbit in a trap we quickly called aur parents . They helped the rabbit to get out the quikly ran way

Answer 1

лучше написать we went to the forest FOR gathering.
after we HAD collected a ...
on the our way home when we saw a rabbit in a trap we quickly called our parents
to get out and to find the way