Question

Помогите пожалуйста. Проверьте сочинение. На фото пример по которому я писала это сочинение.
Hi Milana
I hope you're well. Guess where I was last weekend! I decided to go to the Royal Zoo with my friends. The weather was great. There were a lot of people there. There are many interesting animals in the zoo. I feeded monkey and peacock. It was interesting.
After the zoo we went to the restaurant "Very tasty ". We ate ice cream and pizza. Was very tasty!
What about you? Did you visit your grandma? Write back soon.
Arina

Answer 1

Я тебе исправила в некоторых местах в употреблении глаголов прошедшего времени.
Hi Milana
I hope you're well. Guess where I was last weekend! I decided to go to the Royal Zoo with my friends. The weather was great. There were a lot of people there. There were so many interesting animals in the zoo. I fed monkey and peacock. It was interesting.
After the zoo we went to the restaurant "Very tasty ". We ate ice cream and pizza. It was very tasty!
What about you? Did you visit your grandmother? Write back soon. Arina