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My name is Olya. I'm fourteen years. I live and was born in the beautiful town of Boyarka. And to move from it don't want. My favorite place in it, this tranquil Park. I often go there to sit after school. Now I give all the time in school, though I was engaged in dancing and singing. I took this for seven years and would not mind to continue learning it. Lately, I often practise piano. Love to play on it. And I learned a long time and a lot of free time I spend rehearsing the great classical works. In the future, as you finish school, I will be studying for a doctor. Since childhood I want to do. And leave my dream I don't want.

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My name is Olya. I'm fourteen years old. I was born in the beautiful town of Boyarka and live of Boyarka. And I don't want to move from this place. My favourite plcae in the town it Tranquil Park. I often spend there time after school. I spend most of my time on school subjects, though I an now engaged in dancing and singing. I have been dancing and singing for seven years and I wouldn't mind to continue learning it. Lately I've started playing the piano. I really like to play it. I learned playing the piano years and I spend much time rehearsing many great classical compositions. I want to be a doctor in the future, by the way. I've wanted to become a doctor since childhood and I won't leave my dream just like that.