Question

Пожалуйста, будьте добры, проверьте, правильно ли я составил сочинение по английскому языку.
How I spent my summer holidays


Summer
- the holidays. My favourite season is summer. I love them
very much awaited. However, I spent them badly. This summer was
not remembered. All summer I stayed home. A couple of trips I went to the
village. But there I didn’t
like. There was no creature comforts. In the city I watched TV, read books. Sometimes, I played computer games
and walked. In the street I played football. Sometimes, my friends and I went to
the cinema. In the summer I read books which the teacher asked to read for
the summer. I read almost everything. Some of books were very large, but
some of them I liked. At the end of the summer, I really wanted to
go somewhere, but it didn't happen. Hopefully next summer I spend more
better. 

Answer 1

Да нормальное сочинение

Answer 2

правдо поправить бы надо а то у тебя смысл теряеться в некотырых предложениях!