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  Irkutsk   the capital east  Siberiaю   One of the
oldest cities in Russia. Him  three  hundred and fifty years.  Irkutsk  
is located on the banks of the Angara River,  in sixty three kilometers from lake Baikal
and  a lot of  tourists visit it every years.  In the 
old part of the  city there   lots of 
interesting  ancient buildings.
You can  visit   art museum, the house-museum
Volkonskogo,  icebreaker museum Angara.
You can  also visit   musical 
a  theater,  theatre drama, opera and puppet theater.  Tourists can see the Catholic  Cathedral 
or  Spasskaya   church they very beautiful.  There are 
some fantastic restaurants in the Irkutsk. You can have lunch at one of
the many cafes in the  centre of the
city. Baikal is one of the oldest lakes in the world.  The depth of the like is one thousand six
hundred thirty-seven metres. The water is fresh clean and clear. In the  lake there are many fish:  omul, harius, sturgeon, cig   and 
seals. Tourists usually go to like Baikal. They can buy  souvenirs and eat fish there.    In Irkutsk 
there are more  six hundred
thousand people and  third of  people of different  nationalities^ Russian, Buryats, Tatars
Poles, Germans, and  another. All the
people are  friendly, live and  work 
together.  Пожалуйста проверьте мое сочинение. Правильно ли все. Если нет исправьте ошибки. Заранее вам благодарна.

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Почти правитьн вот правильный текст-Irkutsk the capital east Siberiaю One of theoldest cities in Russia. Him three hundred and fifty years. Irkutskis located on the banks of the Angara River, in sixty three kilometers from lake Baikaland a lot of tourists visit it every years. In theold part of the city there lots ofinteresting ancient buildings.You can visit art museum, the house-museumVolkonsky, icebreaker museum Angara.You can also visit musicala theater, theatre drama, opera and puppet theater. Tourists can see the Catholic Cathedralor Spasskaya church they very beautiful. There aresome fantastic restaurants in the Irkutsk. You can have lunch at one ofthe many cafes in the centre of thecity. Baikal is one of the oldest lakes in the world. The depth of the like is one thousand sixhundred thirty-seven metres. The water is fresh clean and clear. In the lake there are many fish: omul, harus, sturgeon, cig andseals. Tourists usually go to like Baikal. They can buy souvenirs and eat fish there. In Irkutskthere are more six hundredthousand people and third of people of different nationalities^ Russian, Buryats, TatarsPoles, Germans, and another. All thepeople are friendly, live and worktogether.