Предмет: Английский язык,
автор: vadimik862
Homework
Task 1 A description of a favourite place
GET READY Read about Tom’s favourite place.
Where is it? What does he like doing there? Read again and underline because and so.
Think about how Tom uses these words to join ideas in a sentence.
My favourite place is the beach. I like going there in the afternoons because all my friends go there then. I like feeling the sand under my feet, so I take off my shoes and walk along the beach. I love the sound of the birds and the sound of the sea. It’s amazing!
PLAN Make notes about your favourite place.
Where is it? Why is it special for you? What do
you have there? What do you like doing there?
WRITE Write a paragraph of about 50 words
about your favourite place. Use because and so.
IMPROVE In pairs, read your own paragraph
and your partner’s. Check for mistakes.
Give your partner two ideas to make their text
better. Use your partner’s advice and rewrite
your paragraph.
Ответы
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**My Favourite Place: The Park**
My favorite place is the park. It's special to me because it's a peaceful oasis in the heart of the city. I have fond memories of spending time there with my family. The lush greenery and vibrant flowers create a serene atmosphere. I enjoy reading a book on the park bench because it's quiet, and I can escape the hustle and bustle. The tall trees provide shade, so I often have a picnic there with friends. The gentle rustling of leaves and the distant laughter of children playing make it a delightful retreat. I cherish this place because it allows me to unwind and connect with nature.
*Improvement Suggestion: Consider adding specific sensory details to enhance the vividness of your description.*
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