Question

НАЙТИ ЗДЕСЬ 6 оШИБОК!!!!
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I just arrived at the station on the 3:40 train from Highvale and was making my way to the exit when a station
employee approached me. To my astonishment, he accused me of having sprayed graffiti on a train there
the week before. When I attempted to reason with him, he forcibly led me to an office and went through.
my private belongings. I could not have vandalised the train as I was away on holiday with my family at the
time and told him so. He was about to call the police when I insisted he speak with my parents to establish
my innocence. Having done so, he should apologise, but didn't.
The incident was particularly upsetting because I was treated like a common criminal, in full view of other
passengers. Furthermore, I am shocked that a station employee allows to treat a member of the public in this
way. It was so humiliating experience that I decided to contact you to complain.
I demand that you investigate the matter and take appropriate measures to prevent such an incident from ever
happening again. I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully.
Angela Mellors

Answer 1

Just & was - не можуть стояти в одному реченні.

When I attempted to reason with him, he forcibly led me to an office and went through. - attempted - теперішній час, went - минулий

My private thoughts - чесно, незнаю чому, але впевнена на 100% що це неправильно

I could not have vandalised the train as I was away on holiday with my family at the
time and told him so - could & was - два різний часи

Having done so, he should apologise, but didn't. - having & should різні часи

I look forward to your response. - look має бути looked