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rewrite the email so that it is more formal. Use the writing focus and the language focus to help you.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inquire about the possibility of attending your esteemed language school in London to improve my English language skills. I plan to visit London in July and would appreciate your guidance regarding the registration process.

I am a 17-year-old student from Spain, and I am eager to enhance my English proficiency in a professional and reputable institution such as yours. Can you please provide information on availability for the courses during July, along with the cost of enrollment and other related expenses As an international student, I would also appreciate your guidance on arranging suitable accommodation during my stay in London.

Would you kindly advise me on the options available for accommodation near the school or any assistance you may be able to offer?

I look forward to hearing from you soon, and thank you in advance for your assistance.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]