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When I was in the theme park, I saw a real fairy tale. The first thing I saw was shops selling toys, sweets, balloons. After that I saw attractions: rollercoaster, carousels, trampolines and a Big wheel. I jumped on trampolines, rode on a rollercoaster and rode on a big wheel. I remember the big wheel the most. It was very high and scary. I have never been to this park before. Because we are just moved to a new city. I will definitely visit it again. The whole day I was overwhelmed with emotions. Playing on trampolines with other children, I have never laughed so much. Riding on a rollercoaster was a lot of fun, I didn't find it scary. Riding on a big wheel was scary first, because I am afraid of heights, but then the fear went away. A wonderful picture opened up before me. It was an unforgettable and fun day.​

Answer 1

This text looks correct to me and there don't appear to be any errors. It's a nice description of a day spent at a theme park, with a clear description of the different attractions and activities that were enjoyed. It's great that you had such a fun and memorable day!