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Tim and his friends Katya and Steve went hiking last week to forget about the problems and get positive emotions. They planned to climb a snow-covered mountain. The weather was cold but sunny. shortly before the incident, the children were talking, smiling, joking and laughing.
At some point, the weather began to change. Tim looked up at the sky and saw dark clouds. Suddenly a strong wind blew. A snow storm has begun. the boy rolled down the mountain and fell before his friends could get to the top. They were horrified, but it was necessary to save a friend. Katya decided to stretch the rope to Tim, but he could not catch up. The boy broke his arm. Then Steve suggested calling a rescue helicopter.
The rescue team came to the rescue. Rescuers lifted the boy, gave him hot cocoa and sent him to the hospital. In the end, everything was fine. Despite what happened, the children were happy.

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Answer 1

Відповідь:Tim and his friends Katya and Steve went hiking last week to forget about the problems and get positive emotions. They planned to climb a snow-covered mountain. The weather was cold but sunny. shortly before the incident, the children were talking, smiling, joking, and laughing.

At some point, the weather began to change. Tim looked up at the sky and saw dark clouds. Suddenly a strong wind blew. A snowstorm has begun. the boy rolled down the mountain and fell before his friends could get to the top. They were horrified, but it was necessary to save a friend. Katya decided to stretch the rope to Tim, but he could not catch up. The boy broke his arm. Then Steve suggested calling a rescue helicopter.

The rescue team came to the rescue. Rescuers lifted the boy, gave him hot cocoa, and sent him to the hospital. In the end, everything was fine. Despite what happened, the children were happy.

Пояснення: проблеми били перед and ми ставим кому и не  snow storm а A snowstorm

Ти молодец твір хороший.

Answer 2

Ответ:

Tim and his friends, Katya and Steve went hiking last week for forget about the problems and get positive emotions. They planned to climb a snow-covered mountain. The weather was cold and sunny. Shortly before the incident, the children were talking, smiling, joking and laughing.

At some point, the weather began to change. Tim looked up at the sky and saw dark clouds. Suddenly a strong wind blew. A snow storm begun. the boy was rolled down the mountain and fell before his friends could get to the top. They were horrified, but it was necessary for saving a friend. Katya decided to stretch the rope to Tim, but he couldn't catch up. The boy had broken his arm. Then Steve suggested calling a rescue helicopter.

The rescue team came to the rescue. Rescuers lifted the boy, gave him hot cocoa and sent him to the hospital. In the end, everything was fine. Despite what happened, the children were happy.