Question

Проверьте пожалуйста предложения на английском на ошибки:
1.Yesterday, while I was playing computer, went to rain.
2.last Friday, after I had finished cleaning, I went for a walk.
3.I didn't go to the party as I had a other important things.
4.I was playing volleyball when I cured a dislocated hand.
5.I don't go to bed till I take shower.

Answer 1

1.  ......., when it rained
2. +
3. ........ as I had other important things to do
4. +
5. I won't go to bed, .....