Предмет: Английский язык, автор: nika7797

Англійська срочно потрібно перевірити переклад тексту і виправити помилки якщо вони є

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council1975: Сам перевод хорош. Есть вопросы к самому эссе
nika7797: які?
council1975: Декилька. Наприклад: I used to try to do...Два инфинитива подряд после used to некрасиво выглядят. Я бы начал There was time when I tried doing many things at once. Во втором предложении ошибка в согласовании времен, измените try на tried. И это предложение вообще нужно на два отдельных разбить. Про школу отдельный разговор вести...Тут мне долго писать придется.

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Автор ответа: council1975
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Ответ:

       There was a time when I tried doing a lot of things simultaneously. I really wanted to learn dancing and tried singing at the same time. Apart from that, I wanted to start school the quicker the better, just to absorb more knowledge in different subjects in a short period of time.

       In a while, I realized that doing many things in a short, restricted period of time is an extremely overwhelming overload both for my physical and mental abilities. All things should be done decently and in order, so, I started doing one thing after another.

      I have given up dancing, though I am glad that I made an attempt. Now, I am focused on drawing and also I started learning English. But this time, I have made up a day-to-day list and I strictly stick to the schedule that I have for every particular day. I have an interval between my school studies and outschool courses and I feel much enthusiastic and creative than I used to while having so little time between school and other activities!

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