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Проверьте правильность,пожалуйста : Sasha and Kelly completely different life, and they are both not happy. sasha-old girl from a good caring family, but she is always complaining. in my opinion it is very spoiled girl and her problems are not significant. Kelly is less fortunate. she is very lonely because I do not have dreams about semi.ona. Sasha did not appreciate. But with such a hard life she does not give up trying to be strong and not pathetic. Kelly deserves respect

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Sasha and Kelly  Live  different life, both of them are not happy. sasha is girl from a good caring family, but she  always complains. in my opiniont she is very spoiled girl and her problems are not significant. Kelly is less fortunate. she is very lonely (because I do not have dreams about .) Sasha did not appreciate. But with such a hard life she does not give up trying to be strong (and not pathetic-не корректно сказано,либо убери, либо вставь что то другое). Kelly deserves respect