Question

Пожалуйста, проверьте текст. Всë ли правильно, в какую форму нужно поставить, или добавить какие либо слова.
The cartoon consists of 12 episodes. Yuri Katsuki wanted to become a famous figure skater, but he did not succeed. Then the famous figure skater Viktor Nikiforov, who was Yuri's idol, came to his aid. Victor became Katsuki Yuri's coach. But Yuri Plesetsky, who became the youngest figure skating champion, intervened in his career. After defeating Yuri, Katsuki continued to train. soon he will win the 1st place in the World Championship.​

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Ответ:

Для меня, если честно, всё идеально, я бы так и написал. Единственное, в последнем предложении первое слово не с большой буквы, но это мелочь. Думаю, учитель поставит 10-11 баллов)