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Last year at 9 pm last winter, I was going with a friend to the store for tangerines. But there was ice in the street. So I slipped, fell and broke my nose. My friend, let's call her Lera, decided to help me, but when she came up to me she had fallen and had slipped. That night we did not buy tangerines. Now we remember this situation and think what a loser we are.

Answer 1

last winter at 9 pm* my friend* she fell and and slipped*