Question

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I hang out with friends at my house. Suddenly, the man knocked at the door. He said: "I lives in a flat upstairs." He was terrified by something,and then he started panic, and… walk off. It was late at night, we with friends were really terrified!!!. But then I understood that I live on the 5th floor of five floor houses... it is frightening.

Answer 1

the man said "I live..."
Me and my friends were..
может так