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Yuppies - young people who lead an active business lifestyle urban professional. Yuppies have paying jobs in the clothing business style prefer, follow the fashion, fitness center.
The clothes are a strict yuppie suit - wool and very expensive. Yuppie has a mobile phone (smartphone) latest model, the most expensive laptop and other novelties They also lead the most expensive car, and live in an expensive apartment.

Yuppies usually has no close friends. Yuppie love their job and do it with pleasure. They do not listen to music lovers. Series yuppie replenished every day - their life style now in vogue. Party in the vip-clubs, apartments in the best areas of the vast metropolis, luxury cars, clothes from famous designers.

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