Предмет: Русский язык, автор: fghhiii

Даю 50 баллов!!! Проверьте ошибки пожалуйста в сочинении по русскому! Пишите в каком слове ошибка!!!​

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Автор ответа: thadoBaka
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ошибок нет!!!!!!!!!!!

пятёрочка!!!!!!!!!!!!

Автор ответа: shakvasya
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Ошибки есть. Два раза повторяется предлог на в предложении про солнце которое играет. Во втором абзаце повторяется слово сзади, его нужно заменить.  Писать собачонок некорректно, лучше собачонка, а в идеале щенок. И пишется не жизнерадость, а жизнерадостность.

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