Question

ПРОВЕРЬТЕ ТЕКСТ НА НАЛИЧИЕ ОШИБОК (только знающие), даю много баллов. Dear Jane, Thanks a lot for your letter. My birthday was in August. I turned 12 year sold. I had a big birthday party. I invited a lot of friends. On the birthday we played, danced, had fun while my Mother was cutting cake. I got a lot of presents includes Board games a lot of sweets and other presents. My birthday was very good and had fun. I think that my birthday is one of the Best days in a year

Answer 1

не sold - old
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Answer 2

Пиши какого числа,а то письмо будет не понятным-это первое.

А так все правильно