Question

Asocial behavior is when people behave inappropriately towards others, and they do it in society. One example of a social society is graffiti. People put it everywhere.One must redecorate the building afterwards, because it spoils its look. There are professional graffiti that adorn the house. There is such graffiti on my house, Yuri Gagarin is imagined on it. Such graffiti does not spoil the building but makes it more beautiful.
The next example is the movement to red light. As a driver and pedestrian. After all, it can greet for the trogic consequences.
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Answer 1

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