Question

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In June of this year I had a rest in the training camp on the sea. I made new friends a lot. We spent a lot of time together. the sea water was very warm and clear. The weather was warm and hot. In July I spent time at home. Every day I did watch TV, play computer games and walk with my friends. In August I went to the sea with my family. I spent my summer well and I was full of ipressions.

Answer 1

Итак. В предложении "I made new friends a lot" лучше написать "I made a lot of new friends". Также стоит убрать "did" в предложении "I did watch TV". Ну и в последнем предложении не "symmer",а "summer"