Question

Я написал сочинение. Помогите найти ошибки, если они там есть.
1. This is my room.
2. You see a bedroom in the my room.
3. This bedroom is clean.
4. It is big and cosy.
5. There is a big window on the right.
6. There is a grey table in the right corner.
7. There are brother`s toys in the left corner.
8. There is a big bookcase behind.
9. There are books on the shelf above my grey table.
10. There is a nice and a little table under room

Answer 1

1.+
2.неправильно,нельзя сказать спальня в комнате.
3.Эта спальня чистая.ну +
4.это большой и уютный.ну тут +
5.минус,грам ошибка
6.+
7.+
8.+
9.+
10.-

Answer 2

1. This is my room.
2. You can see a big bed in the my room.
3. My room is clean.
4. It is big and cosy.
5. There is a big window on the right.
6. There is a grey table in the right corner.
7. There are brother`s toys in the left corner.
8. There is a big bookcase behind it.
9. There are books on the bookshelf above my grey table.
10. There is a nice and a little table under room