Question

Yesterday i with my friend Michael were walking near antiques shop. We had stopped and started to consider showcase. There is were many old things/ old seller had come out to us. His name was John. Mr. John had invited us to shop. We was very surprised. In shop we had saw an old coffer and old map of island. Map was burnt and very dirty but it was cool. Mr. John say that this is map of treasure island. Then he gave us map. We was very grateful.
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Answer 1

Всё отлично. Молодец!