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Decision to fight
His biggest term was nine-year-long, which he received for the sale of drugs.
- I thought it was easy money. Quickly sold, got the money and you can relax.
However, due to such entrainments from Andrew, one by one began to turn away family and friends. Sometimes, common sense woke up, and thought to throw that step by step destroys the life.
- But every time I fell. I covered overwhelmed with fear and shame that I could not handle. I have no family that I once wanted to have no friends that would come to the rescue and I was back to drugs. They helped me forget my problems "tomorrow." An alcoholic and drug addict to go all the way according to need to sink to the bottom of say dependent. Its bottom I reached, once again in prison.
During his prison sentence, the man lost his brother and mother, who believed that he fix it and get back to them.
- I began to pray for them, and gradually came to faith in God. I realized that I need to fight, because soon I'll be released and don't want it to happen again. But one I would not cope. At my request, I was sent to a rehabilitation center for drug addicts located at the regional hospital in Arkhangelsk region. Of course, it was not easy. Not all have survived. Some addicts have left rehab and decided that they all will. But it is misconception.
"Better not try"
Today, Andrew for 43 years. His life cardinally changed. He was released conditionally ahead of schedule, attends support group, and lives a quite normal life. He has a job and Hobbies.
- I used to be afraid of, I am afraid of my laziness. I always try to take something myself. I don't chase material benefits. I have made friends. There are people who are willing to help, to support.
Not to sit once again without work, Andrew went in for sports. Plays football and tennis.
Today, looking back, I would like to advise everyone, never even trying drugs. The man himself does not notice how quickly sits down and ruins his own life, plunging to the bottom. Quickly slipping especially those who have no family, relatives.
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Решил бороться
Свой самый большой девятилетний срок он получил уже за сбыт наркотиков.
- Мне это казалось легкой наживой. Быстро продал, получил деньги и можно отдыхать.
Правда, благодаря таким увлечениям от Андрея один за другим стали отворачиваться близкие и друзья. Бывало, что здравый смысл просыпался, и приходила мысль бросить то, что шаг за шагом рушит жизнь.
- Но каждый раз я срывался. Меня накрывали чувства страха и стыда, с которыми я не мог сам справиться. У меня не было семьи, которую мне когда-то хотелось завести, не было друзей, которые бы пришли на помощь и я возвращался к наркотикам. Они помогали мне отложить все проблемы «на завтра». Алкоголику и наркоману для того, чтобы свернуть с пути зависимости нужно опуститься на дно, говорят сами зависимые. Своего дна я достиг, попав очередной раз в тюрьму.
Во время отбывания срока мужчина потерял брата и маму, которые верили, что он все же исправится и вернется к ним.
- Я начал молиться за них и потихонечку пришел к вере в Бога. Я понимал, что мне нужно бороться, ведь скоро я выйду на свободу и не хочу, чтобы все снова повторилось. Но одному мне было не справиться. По моей просьбе, я был направлен в реабилитационный центр для наркозависимых, располагающийся в областной больнице Архангельской области. Конечно, было не просто. Не все выдерживали. Некоторые наркоманы бросали реабилитацию, решив, что они и так все смогут. Но это заблуждение.
«Лучше и не пробовать»
Сегодня Андрею 43 года. Его жизнь кардинально изменилась. Он освободился условно досрочно, посещает группы поддержки и живет вполне нормальной жизнью. У него есть работа и увлечения.
- Раньше я боялся работы, сегодня я боюсь своей лени. Я стараюсь всегда чем-то занять себя. Я не гонюсь за материальными благами. У меня появились друзья. Есть люди, которые готовы помочь, поддержать.
Чтобы не сидеть лишний раз без дела, Андрей увлекся спортом. Играет в футбол и в теннис.
Сегодня оглядываясь назад, я хотел бы всем посоветовать, даже никогда не пробовать наркотики. Человек сам не замечает, как очень быстро подсаживается и ломает свою жизнь, погружаясь на дно. Особенно быстро скатываются те, у кого нет семьи, родных.
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Decided to fight
He received his longest nine-year sentence already for selling drugs.
- It seemed to me easy money. I sold it quickly, got the money, and you can have a rest.
True, thanks to such hobbies, relatives and friends began to turn away from Andrei one after another. It happened that common sense woke up, and the thought came to abandon what, step by step, destroys life.
- But every time I was frustrated. Feelings of fear and shame overwhelmed me that I could not deal with on my own. I didn't have a family that I once wanted to start, I didn't have friends who would come to the rescue, and I returned to drugs. They helped me to postpone all problems "for tomorrow". Alcoholics and drug addicts, in order to turn from the path of addiction, need to sink to the bottom, the addicts themselves say. I reached my bottom, once again in prison.
While serving his sentence, the man lost his brother and mother, who believed that he would nevertheless improve and return to them.
- I began to pray for them and slowly came to faith in God. I understood that I needed to fight, because soon I would be released and did not want everything to happen again. But I couldn't do it alone. At my request, I was sent to a rehabilitation center for drug addicts located in the regional hospital of the Arkhangelsk region. Of course, it was not easy. Not everyone could stand it. Some addicts dropped out of rehab, thinking that they could do it anyway. But this is a delusion.
"Better not to try"
Today Andrey is 43 years old. His life has changed dramatically. He was released on parole, attends support groups and lives a completely normal life. He has a job and hobbies.
- Before I was afraid of work, today I am afraid of my laziness. I always try to keep myself busy. I am not chasing material goods. I made friends. There are people who are ready to help and support.
In order not to sit idle once again, Andrey became interested in sports. Plays football and tennis.
Looking back today, I would like to advise everyone to never even try drugs. A person himself does not notice how very quickly he sits down and breaks his life, sinking to the bottom. Those who do not have a family or relatives slide down especially quickly.
Объяснение:
у тебя только ошибки с запятой. а так у тебя всё правильно переведено! надеюсь помогла тебе) удачи!)♡