Question

Пожалуйста,проверьте текст на английском.Заранее спасибо!!!!!!!!!
I'm Nadia, I'm 28 years old. I want to say a few words about my family. I have a big family, I have a mom, a dad, an older sister and a younger brother. My mother's name is Galya. She is still very young and beautiful. She has blond hair, pale eyes and a wonderful smile. She works as a supervisor in a store, and after work a caring mother. My dad's name is Yura. He is short, with dark hair and light gray eyes. He works as a builder. And in his spare time he likes reading detective stories. My older sister's name is Katya. She has fair-haired hair and blue eyes. She works as an accountant and already has her own family. My brother's name is Kirill. He has blonde hair and brown eyes. Now he is studying at the university. In his spare time he likes to play tennis and is engaged in swimming. At the weekend we gather in my parents' house, share news for the past week and walk in the park. I have a very friendly family.

Answer 1

все правильно написание тоже и содержание хорошее

Answer 2

Будет and he is engaged in swimming в 3 строчке от конца