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I want to tell you about Akiane Kramarik she is a girl from a small town in Idaho whose favourite hobby is painting .Akiane is very creative. She finished 40 paintings that sold for as much as 25.000

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I want to tell you about Akiane Kramarik.
It is a girl from a small town in Idaho (She lives in a small town in Idaho)
Her hobby is painting (She has a nice hobby - painting. favoutite hobby не является корректным, ибо хобби и есть любимое занятие, а так получается 'ее любимое любимое занятие')
Akiane is very creative
She has finished 40 paintings that were sold for more than $25000