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Dear Richard,

Thank you for your letter. I was glad to get your letter.

In your letter you asked me about my house. I live in a three-story brick house. My apartment is quite cozy. I have bedrooms, a bathroom, a kitchen and lounge. I share one room with my grandmother. I spend a lot of time in my room. In front of the window in the garden flowers grow.

In my area there is a small lake, the steam train Museum, playgrounds, forest and stable. In the stable there is a lot of horses. They can be stroked and fed. In the forest you can walk, pick berries, and if you go further, it is possible to see some small animal.
Anyway, I have to go now because my Mum asked me to help her with the washing up. Take care and keep in touch!

With best wishes,
Sasha

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Dear Richard,

Thank you for your letter. I was glad to get your letter.

In your letter you asked me about my house. I live in a three-story brick house. My apartment is quite cozy. I have [How many?] bedrooms, a bathroom, a kitchen and a lounge. I share one room with my grandmother. I spend a lot of time in my room. In front of the window in the garden there are many beautiful flowers

In my area there is a small lake, the steam train Museum, playgrounds, a forest and a stable. In the stable there is a lot of horses. They can be stroked and fed. In the forest you can walk, pick berries, and if you go further, it is possible to see some small animals.
Anyway, I have to go now because my Mum has asked me to help her with the washing up. Take care and keep in touch!

With best wishes,
Sasha