Question

Написала сочинение по английскому, проверьте его пожалуйта на наличие ошибок))
My family is the centre of my life. I live with my parents and my younger brother. We live in a very friendly atmosphere, care and helps each others. We cheerfully spend time together. I often meet with my grandparents. Holidays we note everything together. I love my family and I want that allchildren had same parents loving them as at me.

Answer 1

All children пишется раздельно, а не allchildren
А так ты написала отлично. Мне понравилось))!!!