Question

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Once upon a time there was a young man Gustav in the city of Abstografl. He has fallen in love with the beautiful girl of Vest. When Gustav has seen this darling and the beautiful girl he has right there fallen in love with her, but there was one but. The angry guy Augustus was in love with Vesta. The young man didn't know what to do, but they could deceive Augustus. Vesta had a twin brother by the name of Zot, they have changed clothes of him for dresses and have sent to Augustus. Augustus has noticed nothing and married Vesta's brother. Here so Gustav and Vesta could deceive angry Augustus. Also they lived long and happily, in love and a consent.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Once upon a time there was a young man Gustav who lived in the city of Abstografl. He fell in love with a beautiful girl called Vest. When Gustav saw this darling and beautiful girl he immediately fell in love with her, but there was one rub. An evil man called Augustus was in love with Vesta. The young man didn't know what to do, but they managed to deceive Augustus. Vesta had a twin brother by the name of Zot. Vesta exchanged clothes with her brother and sent him to Augustus. Augustus noticed nothing and married Vesta's brother. This way Gustav and Vesta deceived evil Augustus. Anfd then they lived long and happily, in love and consent.