Предмет: Русский язык, автор: taekook

помогите пожалуйста исправить ошибки , я сама написала сочинение но русский мне не родной и мне трудно.Спасибо заранее!

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Автор ответа: Ricckkki56

В первом абзаце последнее предложение: По смыслу он был……уникальный, незабываемый, наполнен яркими событиями(или что то вроде того) Второй абзац :первое предложение :Это случилось летом, когда… И тоже второй абзац :по смыслу:последнее предложение :и каждый день у нас был разный(напртмер) А Впринципе сочинение хорошее!!Молодец!

taekook: спасибо))

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