Question

Пожалуйста, проверти текст на правильность построения предложений.
Summer will soon begin. This summer i will be able to relax from school. I will have a lot of free time. I'm going to visit many interesting places. We are planning in June to go on tour "Ghosts and witches of Moscow". This is a very interesting tour. Also on vacation I'm going to do a lot of things. I think in the summer I will have lots of fun.

Answer 1

Я думаю что 'We are planning to go on tour "..." in June' хороше.

Answer 2

Нормуль,но главное знать перевод текста............ ..