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Many people believe that the future will be bright, but not all people think so. Let's have a closer look at this.
A lot of people believe, that the future will be better. The scientific and technological revolution will develop faster on our planet. The wars between the countries will stop, and the peace between the different nations will come to the world. The parks will be built instead of the factories, and a lot of new forests will be planted. The air on our planet will become cleaner and fresher. Our planet will become cleaner if people protect the environment.
Also a lot of people expect, that our life in the future will be worse. The science is moving very far away, so the robots will take over the world. Every year there will be more wars, so people will die. The parks will not exist, because the arms factories will be everywhere. People will wear masks, because the planet will very dirty.
Each person chooses their own future. We do not know what will happen after many years. If we want that the future will be bright, we will need to store and protect our planet.

Answer 1

там после if people в последнем предложении 1 абзаца надо поставить will, а так всё более-менее правильно