Предмет: Русский язык, автор: EVGESHAALMET135

Один раз я гулял со своей собакой.Собака резво бежала около ноги.
Но вдруг собака заметила в кустах кошку. Собака напряглась, взвизгнула и сделала рывок в сторону кошки. но не тут-то было. Я сразу взял ее на короткий поводок и удержал собаку (Юра П.)

Вопрос: Представь, что ты редактор. Какие исправления надо внести в рассказ?

Ответы

Автор ответа: дашурик1631

0

У тебя лексический повтор, друг мой.

Предыдущий вопрос

Следующий вопрос

Похожие вопросы

Предмет: Алгебра, автор: olesaakovleva53

решите систему уравнений х+у=14 х²+у²=106

1 год назад

Предмет: Русский язык, автор: Deathgun8888

Составь "Облако слов" на тему "Культурная речь"

ПЖ СДЕЛАЙТЕ ФОТКУ КАК ВЫ ДЕЛАЕТЕ ПЖ ПЖ ПЖ ТОРОПЛЮСЬ ДАМ 20 БАЛЛОВ

1 год назад

Предмет: Математика, автор: Аноним

2) 43 м 27 см - 28 м 78 см.

1 год назад

Предмет: Английский язык, автор: haker00780

1.my brother is going to get/have/make the dentist to pull out his tooth next week.
2.His mother made/had/got him go to school.
3.
1)Doctors made David remove his tonsils when he was eleven.
2)David was made to remove his tonsils when he was eleven.
3)David had his tonsils removed when he was eleven.
3
.1)We made an electrician install a burglar alarm for us in October.
2)We got an electrician to install a burglar alarm for us in October.
3)We had an electrician install a burglar alarm for us in October.
4.
1)I will have Jim lend me some money.
2)I will get Jim to lend me some money.
3)I will make Jim lend me some money.
5.
1)Our neighbours are making some bricklayers build a wall.
2)Our neighbours are having some bricklayers build a wall.
3)Our neighbours are getting some bricklayers to build a wall.
6.
1)Kate got her mother to buy that dress.
2)Kate made her mother buy that dress.
3)Kate had her mother buy that dress.
7.
1)Dany made her friend help her with home assignment.
2)Dany had her friend help her with home assignment.
3)Dany got her friend to help her with home assignment.
8.
1)Alan is going to have the teacher give him a higher score.
2)Alan is going to make the teacher give him a higher score.
3)Alan is going to get the teacher to give him a higher score.
9.
1)Jon got his family to have a summer vacation.
2)Jon had his family have a summer vacation.
3)Jon made his family have a summer vacation.

7 лет назад

Предмет: Английский язык, автор: masha112223

помогите пожалуйста спасибо вам за помощь

7 лет назад