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Проверьте текст на английском .Знаю много ошибок, поэтому обращаюсь.12/25/14
I'm really looking forward to the new year. It is the most magical holiday I know. I am going to the shop . There are a lot of beautiful Christmas-tree igrushek.Krasnye, pink, green, black, yellow. I buy five boxes of Christmas decorations, go home The house I dress up the Christmas tree. Tinsel, rain, balls - all this in the New Year tree. And suddenly I see that the Christmas star razbita.I again go to the store. There's a large selection of stars to ёlku.Neskolko minutes I vyberaem eё.I here I see a big, beautiful, yellow star! It glitters, sparkles. I buy it, carry home. At home, I wore a star on the tree. Elka turned out beautiful! Then I went for a walk in the snow park, mom went with me and we brat.Tam Jr. many times fotografiruemsya.Eta best picture! There I was under the tree, sit and enjoy the upcoming new year godu.Novy - the best holiday, but the preparation for this festival as prikrasno! 50 БАЛЛОВ

Answer 1

It is the most magical holiday that I know.When i'm going to the shop, there are a lot of beautiful Christmas toys: red, pink, green, black, yellow. I bought five boxes of Christmas decorations and went to home .In the house I dress up the Christmas tree. Tinsel, rain, balls - all this in the New Year tree. And suddenly I see that the Christmas star is broken so I again went to the store. There's a large selection of stars to fir-tree.Here I see a big, beautiful, yellow star! It glitters, sparkles. I bought it, carry home. At home, I wore a star on the tree. Fir-tree turned out beautiful! Then I went for a walk in the snow park, mom went with me and brother.Here we many times checked photo.Its best picture! There I was under the tree, sit and enjoy the upcoming new year .New Year - the best holiday, but the preparation for this festival is beautiful! 

Answer 2

весь текст должен быть в прошедшем времени! и нужно определиться все таки это новый год или рождество - new year или christmas???
I was really looking... It was the most...I knew. I went to the shop.
a New Year
There were a lot of Christmas tree decorations. They were red, pink....
I bought....and went home.
In the house I decorated a Christmas tree.
all these things were on a New Year tree.
... I saw that ....star was brocken. I went again...There was ...for a Christmas tree. I was choosing it for some minutes. There I saw a big...It glittered, sparkled. I bought it and carried it home. the tree was beautiful. ... to a snow park. and we took Tam. We took a lot of photos. it was the best...i was sitting and enjoying. new year is the best..and the preparation...is exciting