Question

Как думаете сойдёт к дому мечты если нет напишите что нибудь))) ДАЮ 20 Б
my dream house.
I dream of twenty rooms in the house. I would have had their own room, and my sister own. In my room would be the TV and the computer. I would own a large bed and the color of the room which I like. And I would put a parrot in a separate room for the animals. I would like your kitchen, there to cook for the family. We have been soybeans room for games and fun.Аnd a room for homework. Important thing that was a playground. This is the house of my dream house.

Answer 1

Как по мне, смысл есть, и неплохой, но есть несколько грамматических ошибок. Нужно исправлять?