Question

Не могли бы вы проверить моё мини-эссе и исправить ошибки? Exams - it is compulsory tests which write all students/In this essay I will name some of the advantages and disadvantages of our exams. Let's see disadvantages: Many teenagers have very big stress while they preparing to exam and they feel troubled of exams.Examination preparation is very important and nervous process.Our future depend of our tests results. For some people there aren't opportunity to paid for colladge or university and they trying to make more skills on exams but sometimes they failed.Let's see advantages :From my poin of view,exams can check our knowledges and other people can understood what we know more or not.I think that iit was first and last "+" of exams. To crown it all I want to say that exams should be more easier.Every year we can see that tests became difficult.What's more I will pass exams in next year and I'm very scared them.

Answer 1

Exams are the compulsory tests which have been written by all students.

In this essay I will speak  about some advantages and disadvantages of our exams.

Let's see disadvantages: Many teenagers have very big stress while they are preparing to exam and they feel troubled about (или даже with) the exams.

Exam preparation is very important and nervous process.

Our future depend on (только этот предлог, это устойчивое выражение) our tests' results. For some people there is no opportunity to paid for college or university and they try to show much more skills  during their exams but sometimes they fail them.

Let's see advantages : To my point of view, exams can check our knowledge (только ед. число) and other people must understand what we know or don't know.

I think that it is first and last "advantages" of exams.

To sum it all I want to say that exams should be more easier. Every year we can see that tests become more difficult.

I will pass exams (не нужен предлог ни в коем случае!)  next year and I'm awful scared about them.