Question

Даю 20 баллов!!!!
Скажите правильно ли написано сочинение на английском?



I think a lot of it is important to have a hobby because your passion can help you in the future when choosing a profession. Since childhood I was fond of music and my mom gave me the music school. My main focus was games on piano, and I really enjoyed playing this musical instrument. I want to be a musician. Perhaps no music saves but it gives strength to live, understand us, support us, encourages us to believe in a better future. She plays with our emotions, adapting to us, forcing us to stand before her on her knees. Virtually any heard us sound can be either the beginning or the end of ringtones, we loved each melody is a reflection of our souls. This musician is someone who can share a piece of their soul; otherwise it shall not be for any point. I believe in myself, I believe in music.

Answer 1

очень интересное сочинение, хорошо написано) молодчинка , все правильно)))

Answer 2

Да, все правильно) Если не трудно оцени мою работу и поставь спасибо, а также сделай лучшим) Если что обращайся всегда помогу :)