Question

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My family
My family consists of three people. It's mom, grandma and cousin. Mom works at the post office. Sister lives in Moscow and works in a Bank. Free time we always spend together. We love hanging out together and go shopping. In winter we go skiing and skating. And in the summer I go to the sea and to the village. Family is the dearest thing I have. I love her very much.

Answer 1

My family consists of three people. They are Mom, Grandma and a sister. Mom works at a post office. My sister lives in Moscow and works for a Bank. We always spend our free time together. We like hanging out together and go shopping. In winter we go skiing and skating. And in summer I go to the sea and to the country. My family is the dearest thing I have. I love it very much.