Question

ПРОВЕРЬТЕ СОЧИНЕНИЕ, ПОЖАЛУЙСТА (небольшое)
Music is the spirit of the soul. I like to listen to different music. My favorite kind of music is blues and jazz. And My favorite groups are: The Beatles, The Hollies, The Monkees, The Rolling Stones. I have already finished music school, but often I play the guitar, and the ukulele. I relax while playing the guitar and beautiful tunes take my mood up, that’s why it is my hobby.

Answer 1

Мне кажется, лучше будет между And и jazz не ставить точку, а дальше продолжить предложение.