Question

Проверьте, правильно ли я составил текст о моём домашнем животном (проверьте на грамматические ошибки) (Текст внутри)

 

I would like to tell you about my cat.It is name is Barsik.
It is eyes is yellow,It is color is white.
It is clever, beautiful, naughty and fat.
It like to eat meat and drink milk. Sometimes he drink water.
I like run with it. Also we play with ball together. I like my cat.

Answer 1

ITS(притяжательное) name is Barsik. ITS(притяжательное) eyes ARE yellow, It is white. It likeS to eat meat and to drink milk. Sometimes he drinkS water. I like TO run with it. 

Answer 2

1) Лучше he name is Barsik. 

2) Не   it, а his  или  Barsik has yellow and  white eyes. 

  it- оно, а речь идет о коте 

3) His eyes  yellow and white.

4) I like run with him ( или Barsik)

5) to run 

   

Текст хороший, молодец ! =)))