Question

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1) Once upon a time there lived a Lion in a forest.
2) One day It wanted to sleep under a tree.
3) Suddenly a Lion visited a Mouse.
4) It played on a Lion.
5) A Lion jumped on it.
6) But then a Lion looked a small nice Mouse and stopped.
7) On another day a Lion was caught in a net by a hunter.
8) A Mouse helped it and cut the net.
9) A Lion and a Mouse were funny.
10) They were friends.
11) They lived happy in the forest many years.

Answer 1

везде где Lion или Mouse без a потому что имя собственное и в 11 for many years

Answer 2

1.Once upon a time there lived a Lion in the forest.
2.One day he  wanted to sleep under a tree.
3.Suddenly a Lion met a Mouse.
4  A Mouse wanted to play with  a Lion
5 A Lion jumped on the Mouse.
6 But then a Lion looked at the small nice Mouse and stopped.
7 On the next day a Lion was caught  by a hunting network
8A Mouse helped him and  try to cut the  a hunting network